Striptease

Febrero 9th, 2010

Striptease
Striptease (1996)

IMDB rating: 3.80

Plot: Erin Grant loses care and custody of her daughter when she’s divorced from her husband Darrell, a small-time thief. Struggling for money, she is a dancer at a nightclub, where one night Congressman Dilbeck (in disguise) attacks another member of the audience. A spectator, who recognizes Dilbeck and is fond of Erin, offers to get back her daughter by blackmailing Dilbeck. Things do not work out as planned, though.

buy and download Striptease

Directors: Bergman Andrew

Actors: Reynolds Burt,Assante Armand,Rhames Ving,Patrick Robert,Guilfoyle Paul,Grayson Jerry,Stanton Robert,Hill William,Pankin Stuart,Crime,Drama,Comedy,Thriller,

Would [Ted Nugent Strangehold] be a good song for me to do a striptease dance for my husbnd? or/song too long?
Ive been with my guy for so many years, he’s been with me through the good times and the bad. Vice versa I would do anything for him. Ive recently lost a LOT of weight, and want to do something ultra sexy for him. I was thinking about doing a kinky fresh dance to Strangehold by Ted Nugent. I do nnnnot know how i’m going to pull this off, but trust me I will. I want it to be a secret but do you think this is a good song for this sort of thing? I want to come off like a stripper/sl*t so…should I like….’dance’ during the first half and then just be ‘romantic’ during the second half of the song?? The song is about 8 minutes long lol…so ideas???????


I think that would be a wonderful song! You WILL pull it off!
olderbutwiser | Feb 06, 2010


yes is a nice song !! go get
JUST ME | Feb 06, 2010

Street Kings

Febrero 8th, 2010

Street Kings
Street Kings (2008)

IMDB rating: 7.30

Plot: Tom Ludlow is a veteran LAPD cop who finds life difficult to navigate after the death of his wife. When evidence implicates him in the execution of a fellow officer, he is forced to go up against the cop culture he’s been a part of his entire career, ultimately leading him to question the loyalties of everyone around him.

Directors: Ayer David

Actors: Reeves Keanu,Whitaker Forest,Laurie Hugh,Evans Chris,Cedric the Entertainer,Mohr Jay,Crews Terry,Common,Corbett John,Nolasco Amaury,Gugliemi Noel,Monks Michael,Gates Daryl,Crime,Drama,Thriller,

Spiritually Speaking, How do you like this song?
In the land of Israel, not too long ago.
A man sat in his prison cell, watching the moonlight.
They called him the king of Jews, but he had no crown.
All he had were his hope, for the coming of his Lord.
A Lord that isn’t there when you are in need,
A lord so full of shit, you will die for his deeds.

Guilty or not, you’re full of shit.
Spreading your lies that too many believes.
You are a fake, and I know the truth.
I know your name and your god I do hate.

When the moon fades away, the rise of sawn.
Our self-proclaimed king, he starts to cry.

Guilty, guilty!!!
You will die upon your cross, amongst the other thieves.
Guilty, guilty!!!
You will die upon your cross, amongst the other thieves.

The day has now arrived, and it is time for you to die.
Still blinded by stupidity, believing you are Christ.
Walking down the streets of Jerusalem,
covered in spit, from the people you loved.

Guilty or not, you’re full of shit.
Spreading your lies that too many believes.
You are a fake, and I know the truth.
I know your name and your god I do hate.

Guilty, guilty!!
You will die upon your cross, amongst the other thieves.

In the land of Israel, not too long ago.
A fake sat in his prison cell, watching the moonlight.
They called him the king of Jews, but he was a clown.
And every nail through his flesh is delivered by me.

Guilty, guilty!!!
You will die upon your cross, amongst the other thieves.
Pretty funny right?
Your lame.
Bitch


Lame.
o.
ungodly | Feb 02, 2010


No — it’s not funny — actually you are spot on in one regard — we ARE the ones who nailed Jesus to the cross, by our sinfulness and guilt. And your mocking can just be added to the mocking and scorn he received on the day of his death.

But fortunately, because he did die on the cross, we don’t get the punishment WE deserve — he suffered it in our place.

And I pray that Jesus will forgive you, because you obviously do not know what you do.
scotgirl60 | Feb 03, 2010

Arabian Nights

Febrero 8th, 2010

Arabian Nights
Arabian Nights (1942)

IMDB rating: 6.30

Plot: Dancer Sherazade was told by the stars that she will become wife of the kalif in Bagdad. She tells Kamar, brother of kalif Haroun. He planned a coup d’etat, which failed at first, but supported by the wasir he finally succeeds. Haroun is injured and gets help from Ahmad’s actor troupe, where he is nursed by Sherazade, who doesn’t recognise him. When she hears that Kamar is looking for her she goes to him, but is sold with the complete troupe of actors to slavery. They’re able to escape, but Haroun is still in danger. To save him, Sherazade agrees to poison Kamar, but Haroun tries to establish his rulership first.

Directors: Rawlins John

Actors: Sabu,Hall Jon,Erickson Leif,Gilbert Billy,Barrier Edgar,Lane Richard,Bey Turhan,Qualen John,Howard Shemp,Davis William ‘Wee Willie’,Gomez Thomas,Greig Robert,Action,Adventure,

Complete/Original version of "The Arabian Nights"?
Hi all. :-)

I know that the Arabian Nights are a massive collection of different stories, ranging from simple to political to adult and so on… I’m looking for a place to read them. All the books I’ve found either just have the more whimsical ones (like Aladdin and Ali Baba) or they are incredibly abridged. Is there a site with all of them on, or a good book to look for?

Thanks :-)


The "original" version was written in Arabic. I don’t think you want that. There are several good editions of these tales. Try this one (in two volumes)

http://www.librarything.com/series/The%2 0Arabian%20Nights,%20translated%20by%20H addawy%20%281%29

or this one (older)

http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0 517265753/ref=nosim/librarythin08-20

or this one, which has been very well received by teachers of younger readers

http://www.amazon.com/Thousand-Arabian-N ights-Oxford-Collections/dp/0192750135/r ef=pd_rhf_p_t_4

If you want to read them on line or download them, go to the Gutenberg site

http://www.gutenberg.org/catalog/world/r eadfile?fk_files=1067175&pageno=1
MOM KNOWS EVERYTHING | Feb 04, 2010


Sir Richard Francis Burton, The Book of the Thousand Nights and a Night (1885, ten volumes) would seem to be the one you want. Although, you might want to hunt down later versions which go back to the original source documents as well.
not a top con & proud | Feb 04, 2010

Phantasm IV: Oblivion

Febrero 7th, 2010

Phantasm IV: Oblivion
Phantasm IV: Oblivion (1998)

IMDB rating: 5.30

Plot: Phantasm: Oblivion is the 4th installment of the series. The cast from the orginal Phantasm returns as Mike attempts to find how the tall man came to be. Mike, along with Cody and some help from Reggie, travels through various dimensions of time and space to find the source of the tall man.

Directors: Coscarelli Don

Actors: Baldwin A. Michael,Bannister Reggie,Thornbury Bill,Ivy Bob,Scrimm Angus,Scrimm Angus,Stone Christopher L.,Gasster David,Kassel Aidan,Avary Eric,John Andy,Horror,Sci-Fi,

where can you watch Phantasm IV: Oblivion?
it’s not on watch-movies.net


surfthechannel.com

rustynail | Sep 27, 2009

Mickey, Donald, Goofy: The Three Musketeers

Febrero 7th, 2010

Mickey, Donald, Goofy: The Three Musketeers
Mickey, Donald, Goofy: The Three Musketeers (2004)

IMDB rating: 6.40

Plot: Best buddies Mickey, Donald, and Goofy are small-time janitors with big dreams of becoming Musketeers. Peg-Leg Pete, captain of the Musketeers, points out why they’ll never make it: Donald is a coward, Goofy is a dim-wit, and Mickey is short. But things change when Princess Minnie demands Musketeer bodyguards when assassins, hired by Pete so he can be king, nearly drop a safe on her. Knowing real Musketeers are too-well trained, Pete hires Mickey, Donald, and Goofy, the clumsy janitors as Musketeers and Minnie’s bodyguards.

Directors: Cook Donovan

Actors: Allwine Wayne,Farmer Bill,Cummings Jim,Paulsen Rob,LaMarche Maurice,Bennett Jeff,Anselmo Tony,Anselmo Tony,Harnell Jess,Welker Frank,Animation,Adventure,Comedy,Family,

Any one get Disney 100 Years of Magic 132 DVD Treasure Chest DVD Boxset?
Disney 100 Years of Magic 132 DVD Treasure Chest DVD Boxset +Free Gift 6 Disney Stamps
FEATURES

Actors: ANIMATED
Seasons: Movie Collection
Episodes: 130 various aniamted films
Package: Box Set Treasure Chest
Category: Cartoon
Format: NTSC
Region: 0 (Playable on Region 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 DVD Players)
Number of discs: 132
Audio Track: English
Optional Subtitles: English
Weight: 4 kg
Condition: Brand new factory sealed
This box set includes:
1. Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs
2. Pinocchio
3. Fantasia
4. Fantasia2000
5. Dumbo
6. Bambi
7. Bambi II
8. Saludos Amigos
9. Fun and Fancy Free
10. Cinderella
11. Cinderella II: Dreams Come True
12. Cinderella III: A Twist in Time
13. The Wild
14. Alice in Wonderland
15. Peter Pan
16. Lady and the Tramp
17. Lady and the Tramp II: Scamp’s Adventure
18. Sleeping Beauty
19. 101 One Hundred and One Dalmatians
20. 101 Dalmatians II: Patch’s London Adventure
21. The Sword in the Stone
22. The Aristocats
23. Bedknobs and Broomsticks
24. Robin Hood
25. The Fox and the Hound
26. The little Mermaid
27. The little Mermaid II: return to the sea
28. Beauty and the beast
29. Beauty and the beast II: The Enchanted Christmas
30. Aladdin
31. The Return of Jafar
32. Aladdin and the King of Thieves
33. The Nightmare Before Christmas
34. The Lion King
35. The Lion King II: Simbi’s Pride
36. The Lion King1 12
37. Pocahontas
38. Pocahontas II: Journey to a New World
39. Toy Story
40. Toy Story 2
41. James and the Giant Peach
42. The Hunchback of Notre Dame
43. The Hunchback of Notre Dame II
44. Hercules
45. Mulan
46. Mulan II
47. Tarzan
48. Tarzan II
49. Valiant
50. Dinosaur
51. The Emperor’s New Groove
52. Krook’s New Groove
53. Recess: School’s Out
54. Atlantis: The Lost Empire
55. Atlantis: Milo’s Return
56. Lilo & Stitch
57. Lilo & Stitch 2: Stitch Has a Glitch
58. Treasure Planet
59. Brother Bear
60. Brother Bear 2
61. The Jungle Book
62. The Jungle Book 2
63. Home on the Range
64. The Three Musketeers
65. Mickey’s Twice Upon a Christmas
66. Chicken Little
67. the wild Swans
68. Felix the Cat Saves Christmas
69. Mickey’s Magical Christmas: Snowed in at the House of Mouse
70. Mickey & Minne
71. Donald duck and the gorilla
72. Casper
73. Three Little Pigs
74. Wikipedia
75. The Black Cauldron
76. Return the Never Land
77. Big Race Tortoise vs Hare
78. Everybody Loves Donald
79. Everybody Loves Goofy
80. Everybody Loves Mickey
81. Honey baby
82. Gulliver’s Travels
83. Life with Mickey Town
84. Walt Disney Treasures 1
85. Walt Disney Treasures 2
86. Walt Disney Treasures 3
87. Walt Disney Treasures 4
88. Walt Disney 100 Yes of Magic: goofy Sport
89: The Three Caballeros
90. Who Framed Roger Rabbit
91. Mary Poppins
92. The Rescuers Down Under
93. The Rescuers Down Under 2
94. Monsters Inc.
95. Finidng Nemo
96. The Incredibles
97. Cars
98. Winnie the Pooh: Story Book
99. Winnie the Pooh: Very Merry Pooh Year
100. Winnie the Pooh: Heffalump Movie
101: Winnie the Pooh: Halloween Movie
102: Winnie the Pooh: Springtime with Roo
103. Winnie the Pooh: 123
104. Winnie the Pooh: All for One, One for All
105. Winnie the Pooh: Many Adventures
106. Winnie the Pooh: The Search for christopher Robin
107. Winnie the Pooh: Franken Pooh
108. A Bug’s Life
109. Disney Heroes Volume One
110. An Officer and a Duck
111 Meet the Robinsons
112 Underdog
113 Ratatouille
114 The Adventures of Ichabod and Mr. Toad
115 Disney My Friends Tigger And Pooh Super Sleuth Christmas Movie
116 The Chronological Donald: Vol. One
117 The Chronological Donald: Vol. Two
118 Mickey Mouse Clubhouse Mickey Saves Santa
119 Mickey’s House of Villains
120 Mickey Mouse Clubhouse: Great Clubhouse Hunt
121 Disney Princess Enchanted Tales: Follow Your Dreams
122 The Tigger Movie
123 Tom and Jerry 1
124 Tom and Jerry 2
125 Tom and Jerry 3
126 Tom and Jerry 4
127 Tom and Jerry 5
128 Tom and Jerry 6
129 Tom and Jerry 7
130 Tom and Jerry 8
131 Tom and Jerry 9
132 Tom and Jerry 10
Total Items Cost: $120

+ Shipping Cost: $51

Total Payable Cost: $171.00
I just need to know if any already got the the set so i know it a good bye!
I just need to know if any already got the the set so i know it’s a good bye!


HAHA. I bet you bought it off ebay?

I know exactly where they come from and you can buy them DIRT CHEAP directly from the wholesaler. I’ll give you a MASSIVE clue. The outer box has Chinese writting on it. Do you really think Disney themselves would release all those movies in one box set?

$130 DELIVERED.

655321 | Nov 25, 2009


=0
How much does that cost!?

It’s like my dream come true. But it’s probably really expensive, right?
The UK Goddess *Accalia* | Nov 25, 2009


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Life Less Ordinary, A

Febrero 5th, 2010

Life Less Ordinary, A
Life Less Ordinary, A (1997)

IMDB rating: 6.30

Plot: Ewan McGregor stars as a cleaning man in L.A. who takes his boss’s daughter hostage after being fired and replaced by a robot. Two “angels” who are in charge of human relationships on earth, offer some unsolicited help to bring this unlikely couple together. The “angels” are so successful that the daughter soon turns on her father in order to save her captor.

Directors: Boyle Danny

Actors: McGregor Ewan,Lindo Delroy,Hedaya Dan,McNeice Ian,Kanig Frank,Winkler Mel,Tucci Stanley,Shalhoub Tony,Gorham Christopher,Holm Ian,Chaykin Maury,Drama,Romance,Comedy,Crime,Fantasy,

Can you help me spice it up…?
My boyfriend and i have been going out for almost 16months now (1 yr and 4 months) and we hit this point in our relationship where we’re kinda boring eachother…
we’ve considered breaking up, but realized that we just love/care for each other too much to do that and we’re willing to work through this.
i see him every weekend…. (friday afternooon to sunday mid afternoon)
we talk on the phone every night for at least a couple minutes (depending how tired one of us is)

his family isn’t doing to well financially plus he doesn’t have a job (NO he’s not a deadbeat, he actually IS looking for a job! before you judge) so when i come over i’m usually the one putting in the money for us to do something. (as an attempt to have more fun with each other) i only have about 40-50 dollars(when i DON’T take the metro [train] to get to his house [10 bucks] ) and it usually goes away pretty quickly.

is there anything we can do that is cheap/ free and out of the ordinary?
in our attempts so far we’ve gone:
hookah bar (not very awesome)
movies (blah)
citywalk (alright… but kinda far)
ice skating (a blast)

(in OUR opinions)

i live in Lancaster CA and he lives in Valencia CA
i ALWAYS go to his place because i can stay at his place (he can’t stay at mine), i have transportation (more or less), and Valencia has more things to do than Lancaster.

Please help. Thanks in advance:)

btw we’re both 18.
lol, no threesome. especially with my sister.

and no i don’t emasculate him…
we’ve talked about that :)


go on a walk.
beach.
watch movies at home.
just talk.
Jess | Dec 16, 2009


The problem is not that you are boring to each other but that you emasculate him. Every time you pay for something he feels less of a man, meaning he will be reserved going "crazy" on you. Do something that he can feel responsible for, something "free" perhaps? You’ll probably have more luck enticing him.
Alan M | Dec 16, 2009


Have a threesome that involves your sister. Then you’ll never have to put forth any more effort for the rest of your long and happy relationship. Thumbs down? Fine. That’s the last time I try and help you.
jamie t | Dec 16, 2009


Me and my boyfriend like to go to other cities together. We live in AZ and sometimes we’ll take an hour or so drive in any direction and just take in the sites or so to some ordinary tourist trap we’ve never been too. It’s kind of fun. Once we stumbled upon a "ghost town" and watched a "gun fight" show. Once we went driving and didn’t find anything fun so we just pulled off to the side of the road and went for a little walk finding interesting things like cool colored rocks and once even found a skeleton of a dog or coyote. Plus pulling off the side of the road for a quickie is pretty awesome too! ;P
We’ve been to Tucson, flaggstaff, Sedona, Alpine, Jerome. And if you stay the night in the car all of it is for free! Site seeing is the cheapest way to have fun for us. Plus we really just enjoy each others company, which helps a lot.
alexisowsley | Dec 16, 2009


Hey why not work out together? Find a gym and use up the first month free promotion, or you guys can learn how to play an instrument together. Is there a marina around?…Rent some paddle boats and go out on the water. Is there anywhere to camp? I’m running out of ideas, check out the library for more ideas.
Jon | Dec 16, 2009


Spicing it up for fifty bucks is hard. There comes a time in every relationship where you hit the wall and wonder what you can do to keep it fresh and new, and at 18 you will hit that wall several times before it’s over. Yo could do new movie snack night with friends in an attempt to spread the cost out. Everybody chips in for a good movie and some snacks. It’s a great way to net work and meet new people. rent a horrible movie and point out the useless bitches. Theres one in every B rated horror film. You’re in Cali, not sure how close to the beach but go clam digging if you like seafood. Not sure how to do that but it sounds fun. Grab some friends go to the beach with tents and have a bon fire. Hotdogs and marshmellows are cheap and a good ocean sunset rocks every time. So just dig deep there’s all sorts of things to do. Good luck
cheraphim2000 | Dec 16, 2009


If you want something a little different, here’s a few ideas:

rock climbing

disc golfing (frisbee golf)

tandem cycling to some place where you can grab a snack and chill

star gazing (like, with a telescope, if you know someone who has one)

cooking (find something you’ve never made before, but looks good, and make it!)

make a floor plan of your dream house together

get out your old photo albums and make a "story" with both of your photos by either photoshopping them or just cutting them out and writing a story based on the pictures you make (funnest to do when you use pictures from before you two met)

make a music video by taking videos of yourselves and putting them together with your favorite songs and post them on youtube.

go cliff jumping

make candy cards for each other using the name of the candy as the words for the card (obviously the card will be pretty large, so you’ll have to get a couple pieces of construction paper, but all-in-all it’s not that expensive)

do a service project together

make cookies together for friends/family and deliver them (make sure you save some for yourselves!)

christmas caroling (’tis the season!)

ice blocking

make gingerbread houses
Captain Ahab | Dec 16, 2009

The City Is Mine

Febrero 5th, 2010

The City Is Mine
The City Is Mine (2008)

IMDB rating: 6.80

Plot: Gruver has just gotten out of the joint after serving a five-year sentence for drug-dealing but has no intention of going straight. Driven by greed, ego, and the only life he has ever known, Gruver is hell-bent on taking back his city from the gangsters who moved in on his drug business while he was locked up. With a crew that fell apart while he was gone, a ruthless detective who will stop at nothing to put away the city’s hustlers, and four new drug kingpins not about to give up their rule, Gruver will have to risk it all in his climb back to the top. Will the double threat of more prison time or assassination by his enemies derail his plans? Or will the promise of a new relationship with the sensual and seductive Erica – who is captivating his time and attention like no woman ever has – help him see the possibilities of a different life ahead?

find here and download The City Is Mine here and download version for iPhone

Directors: Pierre Patrick

Actors: Gay Sergio,Hite Cary,Interdonato Kevin,Ponton Kirk,Smith Keyon,Action,Drama,

How do I approach this with my mother?
in January 2007 a house was purchased in mine and my fiances name by my mother. We lived in it for almost a year and then we moved far far away for my fiance to work. When we left my mum decided to sell her house and so my younger brother moved into ‘our’ home. My mum said that my brother gets 2 years in the house and when we come back to the city we are to sell the house and split the money between my brother and myself. It has now been 2 years and we are likely to be moving back to the city in about 4 months time and we will need a home. My brother however is 20 years old and he is a boozy teenage type with a low paying job and a really poor attitude (I can’t even have a conversation with him without being sworn at). I know 100% that he is NOT READY to afford his own accommodations, he could not get a mortgage for a house even with the $175,000 he would get from this house, and he will say he doesnt want to rent. I have two kids myself and so I know that my mum is unlikely to push my brother out.
Basically I want to know what I should do. Should I even bother asking her about it or is that rude? It is like a gift and I don’t want to ask for it but at the same time that money would be extremely helpful to us. We could afford to buy a house without that money (just have larger repayments or a smaller home) and I don’t really know if I am actually entitled to it or not. Yes this house is legally owned by me but I wouldn’t do anything to upset my family. I can’t even bring this up in a conversation with my brother because he gets angry with me and I am scared to talk to my mum about it. What should I do?


Buddy, I don’t think it’s rude to ask. Yes you should ask for your money. You have a family and you are starting a life, and whatever your brother chose to do with his life, well that’s his decision. But this shouldn’t be the reason why you can’t go on with your life and get what you’re entitled for. Besides, You will benefit not only yourself, but your own family. Your brother needs to be out on his own. He’s an adult, doesn’t matter if he’s responsible or not, he’s an adult and he needs to leave the nest and learn how to fly solo and learn some responsibility. This will help him (hopefully) grow up a little. If this house is legally owned by you, then your family has no other choice but to get over it. Trust in the goodness of your mom. Screw your brother! If he is unwilling to talk to you and have an actual conversation with you, don’t waste your time considering him in your decisions none! Don’t be scared of your mother. Sometimes mothers need to learn that the best thing that they can teach their children is a little independence.

What you should do: get your realstate money, and get on with your life without fear. Your partner and your children should always be your concern. Your brother and your mother…well they should too, but you cannot be responsible for them all the time. They are adults as well. Fear is worse than cancer and won’t let you progress in life. I know you love your brother, but he needs to grow up. He’s obviouly not living in fear any, is he?
Alehkz | Feb 02, 2010

Wild Child

Febrero 5th, 2010

Wild Child
Wild Child (2008)

IMDB rating: 5.90

Plot: A rebellious Malibu princess is shipped off to a strict English boarding school by her father.

Directors: Moore Nick

Actors: Pacar Johnny,Quinn Aidan,Pettyfer Alex,Butterworth Paul,Drama,Romance,

I need some help with a few questions about genetics?
My teacher asked 100 questions similar to these, and other biology questions, and i’m having troubles with these last few. Please help!

Draw a sample pedigree with three generations in which the paternal grandfather has a rare
dominant autosomal trait. What is the probability that one of his children will have the
disease? That one of his grandchildren will have the disease?

A pea plant with red flowers is test crossed, and one-half of the resulting progeny have red flowers, while the other half has white flowers. Therefore, the genotype of the testcrossed parent was
A) RR.
B) Rr.
C) rr.
D) either RR or Rr.
E) This cannot be answered without more information.

On the same chromosome of Drosophila melanogaster that carries the p (pink eyes) locus,
there is another locus that affects the wings. Homozygous recessives, byby, have blistery
wings, while the dominant allele By produces wild-type wings. The P and By loci are very
close together on the chromosome; that is, the two loci are tightly linked. In answering
these questions, assume that no crossing over occurs.
a. For the cross PPByBy * ppbyby, give the phenotypes and genotypes of the F1 and of the
F2 generations produced by interbreeding of the F1 progeny.
b. For the cross PPbyby * ppByBy, give the phenotypes and genotypes of the F1 and of the
F2 generations.
c. For the cross of Question 7b, what further phenotype(s) would appear in the F2
generation if crossing over occurred?
d. Draw a nucleus undergoing meiosis at the stage in which the crossing over (Question 7c)
occurred. In which generation (P, F1, or F2) did this crossing over take place?

Thanks so much for the help!

Prey

Febrero 5th, 2010

Prey
Prey (2007)

IMDB rating: 4.70

Plot: An American family on holiday in Africa becomes lost in a game reserve and stalked by lions.

find here and download and download Prey

Directors:

Actors: Weller Peter,Bartlett Jamie,Dowds Conner,Roberts Marius,Sefatsa Muso,Makgoba Jacob,Taylor Ashley,Masha Tumisho,Ocenasek Thijs,Heering Louis,Horror,Thriller,

GCSE Standard?? ENGLISH (descriptive writing?)?
As my eyes driffted open from my distant slumber, I found myself lazzed freely in a vast open space. The harsh sunlight reflected of the broad horizon, blinding the delicate outer-layer of my green-blue eyes. As my eyes grew welcome to the warm, golden sun, i felt myself squint my eyes.Small shapes begain to appere.

Lined in the distance, stood a row of derilcted houses, four or five at the most, The pale red bricks that made the house had started to crumble away leaving the house look frial and timid. The what was white paint that had been neetley painted begun to peel and fade into a now dull grey tint that was spashed messily onto parts of broken bricks.

Weeds and moss had begun to grow, as the unkept building was left to fend for itsself, in the harsh conditions thrown at them. The once was hand crafted window panes had been exposed to the weather for so long that they had begun to splinter, leaving the reailty of the conditions real.

My eyes flickerd up to the the murkey, uncleaned glass in the windows, smashed glass was scatterd among the dark evergreen that englufed the path.

Beyond the acient windows, mold had begun to seep through the dirty walls, waiting all inocent, but ready to pounce like an venus fly trap, to capture there prey and smothering it to death.

..not finished yet!! and im only 15 so sorry for any punctuation or spelling issues (have dyslexia) and the damn spell cheaker thingy isnt showing.

soo basically what do you think? good enough for GCSEs? or to descrpitive?…any improvments are welcome?

thankyou x


Its really good I would say a very high B if not lower A. Make sure you vary your sentance variety and use techniques like metaphors , personifcation that kind of thing :) Good luck
???s?o?????o? ? s! ??!? | Feb 02, 2010

Money for Nothing

Febrero 5th, 2010

Money for Nothing
Money for Nothing (1993)

IMDB rating: 5.50

Plot: When unemployed dockworker Joey Coyle finds $1.2 million that fell off of an armored car, he decides to do the logical thing: take the money and run. After all, he says, finders keepers. He turns to his ex-girlfriend Monica, who works in an investment firm, for advice, before turning to the mob for help laundering the money. While Joey makes plans to leave the country, however, a detective is following his ever-warmer trail in order to recover the cash.

Money for Nothing

Directors: Menendez Ramon

Actors: Cusack John,Madsen Michael,Del Toro Benicio,Rapaport Michael,Chaykin Maury,Gandolfini James,Venito Lenny,Hoffman Philip Seymour,Graham Currie,Faison Frankie,Pansullo Ed,Comedy,Crime,Drama,

Girlfriend Broke Up With Me, Its Just The Way How I Dont Get.Help Pls?
it would b too much to write if i would talk about eachand every thing we had in our relationships.
we’ve been together for 4 months it was a long distance relationship,in the first month we did a good job to see us on tuesdays and fridaysbut after this month passed i had 2 surgerys
commin with always a month Break inbetween itso i needed alot of recovery time,
n we didnt see eachother no more that often.she was stressed out with her over controlling family & having no freedome( always has to stay at home),she was stressed out with the school she had to go to and she messed up her grades and she always was moody.and i was stressed out because i had complicationsat both of those surgerys which ment that the recovery
would take longer and that made me bug out. all these things caused alot of arguments over stupid lil things.

to cut a long story short,i once decided to take a 5 day breakwith the explaination, baby we both been stressed out latlylets give us some time to get back to ourselvs and to make eachother miss us a lil more ,and we already talked about it 4 days befor ( while i was in the hospital) and both of us said if it helps the relationship then by all means lets do it.5 days pass and she fed up why i never called or send her an sms and during those 5 days she send me on tuesday and thursday sms the first said if i can send her some money so she can come by with the train
and the other one said hey bebe i got a new hair cut n i said nice& im excited to see it.
she was fed up. all of a sudden she wants a break n i kept callin every day like why is you doing this to me?first you let me believe this is a good idea and now you fed up?
and all of a sudden i decided this whole break thing over her head n i didnt ask her
n just decided it to do it, and all im thinking, and sorri ladies i dont know if this is a woman thing,
but why couldnt she tell me she dont want that?

then after 3 days i talked to her again n squeezed it out of herwhy she so distant and cold to me n she tried to hold it back as best as she could but then she said she so scared to loose me
n if id be gone its like she would be dieng she couldnt handle that pain no more.

she still wants a break, so last friday i said, baby if you wanna break up with me then just tell me
but this " NOT KNOWING WHATS GOIN ON" situation is killing me,
so she says no just chill and cool out i dont plan to break up or anything
i just need some time for myself now and we talk next week so i replied ok baby thats all i had to know i dont bother you no more during your break until you holla at me again.

so on sunday i get an sms if i can send her some money for the next package of pills,(thinkin things goin ok again after she told me after my one week
break that she stopped taking the pills)
so i said no problem, then she asked if i still got her bankaccount number n i replie yes i do
so she replied "thx you baby" and its been like a over week since the last time she called me baby.
on the next day on monday i get a call saying she changed her mind
n she dont want me to send the money and we cant continue this relationship no more
she got too much shit goin on in her life n its too chaotic n she dont want to pull
me into her problems and that i dont need a girlfriend that is thinkin about killin herself
and that has constantly mood swings n but still praised me how great i am and how much she love me,
and im sittin here like, its 10 in the mornin, wtf is goin on yo?

her dad is very abusive uses violence to communicate and also called her slut
she is very depressiv she has very rough past
but i never thought she would give up on me, asspecially since she was the one
who said baby we got to stick together we’ll work it out everything gon b alright

now after me almost beggin her to not give up, crying whatever, i said you know i recognize now we had a beautiful time and i enjoyed every mind but we not ment for eachother like that,
i said you told me you would do anything to make me happy cuz you love me, get yourself some therapy( cuz she always talked about killing herself n how she hates everything n she dont want no more etc), and i kept it short and sweet, and all of a sudden, after beeing ignored and treated like a piece a shit she never knew, all of a sudden, but can i still call you, you not just any ex to me, you kno im just lookin at some pictures of you , sooo cuteee!!!! i didnt say nothing all i thought was=???????

im very verry verry sorry dat i wrote soooo effin much but pls can somebody explain this to me?
maybe from a girls point of view? i really dont get this whole situation